Play around with a few headlines before you decide on the final one. It implies a negative connotation that she doesn’t really want to be online dating and didn’t feel like taking the time to present herself in the best light.
Smartphones have some awesome camera capabilities now, so get your best friend to take updated photos of you and help you determine what pose and background looks good.
Or you could even hire a professional photographer to ensure you get some great shots.
You’ll also notice a typo at the end (“that” instead of “than”).
She comes off as mean, superficial, and demanding, and I’m guessing the men reading her profile think so, too.
Similar to the “just checking this out” headline above, coming off like online dating is chore to you will be a turnoff to men.